Book By Its Cover

10.4.10

Hey Everyone! Today I am doing our first give away for The Exquisite Book. To enter yourself in the running to receive a copy here’s what you have to do:

I have started the comment section with “Once upon a time…” as my comment. The next commenter has to finish my sentence. The next commenter adds the next sentence. So we will be creating a collaborative story in the comment section. On Friday I will pick a winner randomly from the participating commenters.

ps. If your sentence is inappropriate I will take it down so please no offensive stuff. Also please keep it to just one sentence! Ok play!

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104 Comments
10/4/10  6:25pm
julia wrote

Once upon a time….


10/4/10  6:30pm
golriz wrote

there was a lonely freckle-faced girl who looked out of her rain splattered window, and willed a rainbow to appear.


10/4/10  6:30pm
Michael wrote

…there was an inquisitive girl.


10/4/10  6:35pm
Michael wrote

Ack ok this is continuing from Golriz’s comment:

She wanted to hold the rainbow in the palm of her hand, but she had willed the rainbow too far away.


10/4/10  6:37pm
Pablo Lara H wrote

An inquisitive girl waiting in the window for somebody. The people running in the street. The cars passing by slowly. And inside, a cat waiting next the chimney.


10/4/10  6:40pm
inés wrote

and suddenly, the cat jumped outside and slided towards the rainbow!


10/4/10  6:44pm
consuelo mendez wrote

since there is always two rainbows when there is one in the sky, the cat disappeared


10/4/10  7:20pm
Rose wrote

In a flash, the inquisite girl left her spot by the window and scrambled after the cat into the double rainbow.


10/4/10  7:21pm
Fiona Byrne wrote

But in its place stood a small collection of superiorly intelligent ants, and they began to walk in a pretty formation along the path.


10/4/10  7:36pm
karen wrote

But this was no ordinary pretty formation along the path- no, these ants were marching upon a combination of little musical pebbles, impressed upon the pavement by the doubled rainbow.


10/4/10  7:38pm
sophie wrote

This latticework of tiny marching creatures pulled her along and down (smaller and leggier and lighter as she went), sweeping her into their relentless trek.


10/4/10  8:05pm
Janet wrote

Suddenly a large cloud enveloped the ants and the girl sweeping them into a giant cloud city with cotton candy trees.


10/4/10  8:14pm
Jesseline wrote

A gust of sweet smelling wind carried the girl off the back of one of the large ants that was carrying her, and she found herself being swept away by the strange breeze.


10/4/10  8:16pm
Eleanor Anderson wrote

pink cotton candy made a bed for them all,
providing a sweet respite from a fall,
they filled their tummies till evening came, hollowing out candy caves & taking shelter from rain.


10/4/10  8:31pm
Cathy wrote

They all fell into a sugar coma.


10/4/10  8:33pm
Hoang Nguyen wrote

But, alas, their tummies began to toil in pain, if only they had refrained from stuffing their bodies with cotton candy from feet to brain.
;p


10/4/10  8:36pm
C wrote

The breeze carried the girl and the ant over endless oceans. After many hours adrift, the girl accidentally tumbled off the ant’s slippery back and slipped down below into great blue sea. She landed right in the middle of a jellyfish tea party.


10/4/10  8:48pm
Elizabeth Hatchett wrote

Unfortunately, since jelly fish have only one bodily orifice that they use for everything, it was not a very polite tea party. So the girl swam a little deeper to find more pleasant company…


10/4/10  9:12pm
Olivia wrote

After that, on the never-ending deserted beach, silence would linger forever.


10/4/10  9:36pm
MC wrote

A polite yellow dolphin informed her of a treasure that was hidden in the beach.


10/4/10  9:45pm
Carrie O'Dell wrote

The dolphin told her that the treasure was hidden beneath the home of a sea cucumber, and in order to partake in this treasure, she must befriend the sea cucumber; this proved to be difficult, as sea cucumbers really have no means of communication.


10/4/10  9:54pm
beyond wrote

The girl was relieved when the eery silence was finally broken by a few loud thuds (THUD!THUD!THUD!) behind her.


10/4/10  9:57pm
Kara wrote

While she was considering how to communicate with teh sea cucumber a boat arrived carrying her beloved friend, the cat, who walked up to the sea cucumber and…


10/4/10  10:23pm
JewishGal wrote

sneezed!

“Oh, I’m sorry,” the cat said, “I think I’m allergic to sea cucumbers. (And apparently I can sneeze underwater?)”


10/4/10  10:26pm
Celia wrote

…ate the sea cucumber in one gulp. Smacking his lips he turned and…


10/4/10  11:04pm
Susan Heggestad wrote

belched out seafoam green snowflakes that swirled above their heads, and began to blanket the beach in a downy puff.


10/4/10  11:43pm
Anna wrote

Looking up, the girl and the cat could see small speaks of light glisten through, and day become night.


10/5/10  12:36am
Rachael Ashe wrote

They wandered together through the blue sky night, and the stars above reflected back all of the light they held inside.


10/5/10  1:58am
Rita wrote

Hey, is that cassiopeia up there? the cat said.


10/5/10  2:00am
Jonas Anderson wrote

After walking along the beach for a while they felt how tired they were. The girl picked up the cat and he fell asleep at once.


10/5/10  2:16am
Hanke wrote

…the girl on the other hand couldn’t decide where to rest her tired body, she had a strange feeling something was watching her all along…


10/5/10  3:47am
Daisy wrote

As she lay back and idly gazed again at the stars, she noticed something odd about Cassiopeia.


10/5/10  5:05am
Hannah wrote

Cassiopeia only had one ear…


10/5/10  6:03am
Jill wrote

… and was emitting a sweet pink glow across the night sky. It reminded her of cotton candy.


10/5/10  7:24am
Melissa H. wrote

Hearing a noise behind her, she jumped to her feet and turned around.


10/5/10  7:39am
clare wrote

…Three star thieves were dragging cassiopeia’s ear through the sand, spilling the star’s stories all along the shoreline…


10/5/10  8:00am
Lars wrote

…Realizing that the shoreline was shaped like the lace collar of his aunt who passed away last summer…


10/5/10  8:45am
Sharon wrote

The receding tide had left pockets of sand, dimples and mounds in a pattern that was only discernable as lace from hundresd of feet away.


10/5/10  9:07am
TK wrote

She gave chase.


10/5/10  9:42am
Jevon wrote

Not realizing that her shadow stood still, fully enchanted by the sounds of the ocean’s wailing.


10/5/10  10:11am
sfer wrote

There was a boat waiting for the thieves, that parted with them and the stars as soon as they were all aboard.


10/5/10  11:14am
lisa wrote

Alarmingly, the thieves didn’t realize what else was aboard that ship – a sharp-toothed hetchpas, the evil ancient feline devil!


10/5/10  11:22am
Rachel wrote

The hetchpas kept herself silently hidden- her sleek black velvet fur helped her blend in with the shadows- and she sang bohemian folk melodies to herself while she waited patiently for the thieves to turn down the wrong corner.


10/5/10  12:01pm
Paolo wrote

Which they did.


10/5/10  12:41pm
Sofia wrote

Suddenly a strident sound was heard and that corner seemed to be the end…


10/5/10  2:22pm
giulia wrote

… of a beautiful night, because of her neighbor, so she decided to…


10/5/10  2:28pm
Ellen wrote

…gather up fist-fulls of midnight black hair from out of the corner of the boat. The inquisitive girl began stuffing the car fur into her open mouth until she had swallowed up his whole soul. She immediately felt shifty and devious but…


10/5/10  3:25pm
chelsey wrote

she didn’t feel too guilty, and she tried to curl up in the corner and sleep.


10/5/10  3:25pm
Abi wrote

…wondered whether it was her own nature or the spirit of the hetchpas within her that was compelling her to clentch a machette between her teeth and climb above the rainbows into the heavens. Suddenly she seized, clutching her stomach and…


10/5/10  4:23pm
Camila F. wrote

…making a loud noise. She lifted her dress and realized that cottom candy was coming out of her belly button. She was so scared that…


10/5/10  5:45pm
Maria Helena wrote

…it would never stop. She pulled it and pullet it and pulled the pink soft cotton candy and found herself beeing envolved by it like a cocoon, she felt so…


10/5/10  7:29pm
Matt L wrote

… Exasperated as if the world around her was collapsing into a…


10/5/10  7:33pm
Tiffany Rooprai wrote

…webby sea of spun sugar belly button greatness.


10/5/10  7:54pm
kahleen zenz wrote

Yet, being a girl without fear, she gathered the cotton candy into great piles, set her head upon the treacly pillow, and slept.


10/5/10  8:14pm
Patty wrote

And it was a wonderful, restful sleep — the cool, sweet sleep of angels, the sleep of smart girls, who always get the math problems right.


10/5/10  10:36pm
k' wrote

She dreamt until she woke the next morning, woozy as if she’s hungover from the dream; although as a perfectly good little girl who has not tasted a drop alcohol before, she doesn’t yet know this feeling yet.


10/5/10  10:44pm
Michelle wrote

Her sleepiness quickly fell off her as she realized that today was the day that…


10/6/10  3:50am
Sophie wrote

the teddy bears had their picnic. She ate a big fat..


10/6/10  4:26am
csr wrote

honey-tahini dipped light green cucumber which induced her to sleep and continue her reveries, until . . .


10/6/10  6:48am
rui Vitorino dos Santos wrote

a storm came and the yeti arrived from the mountains and whispered in her ear…


10/6/10  6:59am
valentina wrote

“Wake up, my dear. It’s time to go. Draw your way to get to the sky”. She woke up and found everything so white that she couldn’t resist and started to draw…


10/6/10  8:48am
lauren wrote

From the pencil came a line which quickly became a plaid winged pony who pawed impatiently as her hind legs were completed. Hurry, I’m hungry! Please draw some tender young shoots!


10/6/10  11:22am
ann wrote

she pointed a green pencil on paper and was ready to “grew some grass”, but the pencil had other plans


10/6/10  11:31am
Rosita wrote

It flew from her hands, high up in the air like a silky feather, and then it came to earth suddenly and urgently, rolled over and over again, down a small grey hill and landing with a gentle thud in at the edge of the riverbank.


10/6/10  1:41pm
James wrote

The girl looked back at the empty outline of a horse, and asked if instead he would like some bright red apples.


10/6/10  2:12pm
Ronny wrote

She knew that bright red apples were the key to the soul.


10/6/10  2:13pm
Tamsen wrote

And turning back to the white that was all around them, she used her untrimmed nails to tear apple shaped circles into the air around them.


10/6/10  7:43pm
Hattie wrote

the apples fell and grow and grow until suddenly she was stood in front of a giant red fluffy monster.


10/6/10  8:25pm
marri wrote

“Hello!” the red fluffy monster bellowed out of his toothsome mouth – “and howdy and hi!”


10/7/10  12:17am
eve wrote

The girl took a deep breath and smiled, picked up one of the red apples and offered it to the red fluffy monster.


10/7/10  8:03am
Richard wrote

who took out a red, monster-sized wallet and said, “Thanks, how much do I owe you for that apple?”


10/7/10  10:15am
Babi wrote

She smiled in a beautiful way and said “This is a gift! A gift because today is… is the International Day of Meeting a Great Red Fluffy Monster!”


10/7/10  10:39am
Inés wrote

…but as soon as she said that, the red fluffy monster…


10/7/10  11:49am
Mads wrote

… started crying ….


10/7/10  12:48pm
Arden wrote

“you know” she said, ” Even Red Fluffy Monster deserve kind things. Monsters get such a bad wrap. One movie portrays them as evil and all of a sudden all monsters are in the dumps.” And she reached out…


10/7/10  1:45pm
foreignsand wrote

… grabbed her pencil from the edge of the river and drew rainbows sprouting from the crying monster’s tears.


10/7/10  2:05pm
Ragne wrote

The monster drew big and fluffy clouds, in the shape of….


10/7/10  2:19pm
Emmi wrote

fat pony, mounted the pony and rode towards mountains.


10/7/10  2:43pm
Sarah Sargent wrote

Then it was time for a grilled cheese sandwich with some chocolate milk.


10/7/10  3:34pm
Rachael Beresh wrote

This made her belly ache and her head spin, she didn’t question anything she went right to bed.


10/7/10  3:43pm
Jen K wrote

She woke, and while groggily looking around, she discovered she was floating on a fluffy, marshmallow white cloud, high above the earth. She stood up and…


10/7/10  4:22pm
Carolien wrote

then quickly sat down again while peeking over the edge of the cloud…


10/7/10  4:48pm
Stephanie wrote

and held his hand.

They were friends.


10/7/10  4:56pm
mc_artist wrote

She cooed and felt small, yet safe with him.


10/7/10  6:32pm
Nesi Writes wrote

Sabrina walked into the looking glass meeting the most awesomely fascinating person she’d ever encountered—herself.


10/7/10  6:32pm
Ingrid wrote

so safe that, in fact, that she reclined back into his fluff, closed her eyes, and sunbathed.


10/7/10  6:41pm
House of BEL wrote

She had the new found confidence of a young child riding tall on the shoulders of their stoic yet gentle father.


10/7/10  6:42pm
Bavarian Erin wrote

The afternoon came fast and soon the shadows were lengthening.


10/7/10  6:49pm
Erica wrote

Unfortunately, she got burned to a crisp.


10/7/10  7:18pm
Blackseal11 wrote

The embers glowed softly into the night.


10/7/10  7:53pm
Lacy Simons wrote

…the nightmares came back, with the dull roar of a distant motor…


10/7/10  8:13pm
Kelsey wrote

She woke up, certain she was still being chased by the train robbers in her dream.


10/7/10  8:27pm
Nikkita wrote

The windows in her room glared with the light of street lamps and dawn sun.


10/7/10  8:28pm
IG.B wrote

Rather, it was her darling cat. He curled himself next to her, protectively.


10/7/10  8:34pm
Catherine wrote

The cat purred quietly and fell asleep as the girl gazed out the window.


10/7/10  10:11pm
Rachel A wrote

The sun came up, warming her face, and the little girl stretched out her arms high into the air, wondering, what would happen today.


10/8/10  7:21am
Ela wrote

She decided to go down to the kitchen and start the day with a glorious full English breakfast!


10/8/10  11:38am
+cin wrote

But she did not want to eat alone so she called out to a snail and a rabbit in her garden, and they rushed in to share her meal…


10/12/10  5:40pm
ann cole wrote

The three dined contently on crumpets and jam while talking excitedly about the day ahead and their new formed friendship.


10/13/10  2:52am
daniela wrote

“First of all: do you mind if I wrap everything around here with my silver slime?” asked the snail “My digestion is a little laborious, but you may like sliding down the banisters in a flash, or playing skittles without making noise, or even entering the neck of a bottle…”


10/15/10  11:47pm
megan wrote

The girl readily agreed that a slimy silvered snail patina would improve the decor; however, the rabbit shuddered & interrupted, “…


10/20/10  12:00pm
carol-anne wrote

What?! no cake?” It’s never any good without cake. He stood, turned around and hopped out , shaking his head and his fluffy tail. He sadly didn’t realise that he inadvertently…


10/21/10  4:57pm
Ingrid wrote

hopped onto the cake, it’s sticky pink frosting flying this way and that…


10/21/10  8:29pm
Amarú Salazar wrote

and that sticky pink frosting suddenly start to fly all over the room like a big alive bubblegum, turning everything pink! even they’re eyes were pink!! it was the most weird and pretty thing they ever seen…



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